A Short Erotic Story In Progress

[piercedcock78]

I am involved already in a couple of writing projects.

An editor suggested that I try my hand at erotica. I was told to study for a bit and understand the difference between porn, romance, and erotica.

I did that and so far I have four pages, but before I go any further, I would like to get some feedback. It is straight, cuckold, erotica but with a voyeurism reminiscent of Vox by Nicholson Baker for those familiar.

Let me know if I hit the mark and what works and doesn't work for you.

As always, Enjoy!

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[DJ_Pioneer]

I tried to read it, but if I try and click anywhere on that site a new tab opens up with an ad and it is a bit annoying. If you post it somewhere else I might read it.

 

[piercedcock78]

Thanks for the feedback.

I have had a few people tell me that with other projects and then some don't have an issue at all.

It is basically a free pdf hosting site.

Tomorrow I will try to look around for an alternate way to post them to make it easier for you.

 

[piercedcock78]

Okay.

I think I may have found an easy solution I hope that both of these options will allow everyone who wants to read them to be able to.

The links give you the option just to read or download.

The following pdf's will automatically download (I think).

Let me know if this works.

 

[LydiaSiopha]

I'm already downloading pdf files.